Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, November 4, 2019
cycle safety
2 comments:
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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Hi, i liked how you did the photo. I .like how you did the size for the writing. next time you should do more writing. did you like cycle safety?
ReplyDeleteKia ora cheyenne, i really like your cycle safety post
ReplyDeleteI have done cycle safety before i really like it and it think it is really fun.
Maybe next time you could think about you could use some more capital letters.
What was your favorite thing about cycle safety?