Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, April 16, 2020
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3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
dear Cheyenne i really like your work i can really see that your have took your time and put your all in to this so well done but next time i think you need to add like witch one was your favorite and stuff like that:)
ReplyDeletemany thanks jasmine
Kia ora Cheyenne
ReplyDeleteYou have worked really hard today and done lots of learning activities which I have enjoyed reading. You did a great job listening to my feedback and changing the part in the middle of the 2 circles.
Your next step is to write reflections in your post about your work. For this you need to think carefully about what you really did well e.g. adding lots of information, as well as what you need to improve e.g. only using key words. When you write your blog post just keep the text at a normal size, don't enlarge it because then your work that you are writing about doesn't stand out.
Keep up the awesome effort that you are putting in!
Thank you
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