This week for literacy our topic is exploring the ocean. So l chose to do a descriptive paragraph about Little Blue Penguins. We got a range of different sea animals to pick from and l chose to do the Little Blue Penguin.I think l did well on making the paragraph long and big and not just a quick and short boring paragraph.Next time l think l should work on putting in more adjectives and self edit.
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